Bring a Towel!
I love that all of these books have such excellent covers. To be fair, I have not read the other three books that relate to this one. As many times as I went back and forth, I had no idea what was happening. I still had to read the details in the ad to get an idea of what was going on. The book needs shading. The main premise was there, but now if she went and filled things in with details and descriptions, maybe less Wet. Lots of wetness, things running down legs, fluid everywhere. Its possible someone needs a visit to the doctor. I just cringed a few times at the moistness of it all. All the gooeyness made it hard to take seriously. The book felt like it was more of a rough draft. I think with some work, this would turn into a really great story, minus the “Juicy details”.